Please have a look

[liz]

hello
Ive recently graduated from a digital design program .I have my own site
up and am looking for work. I need some honest feedback from people and
thought this might be a good place to ask. So if anyone would be so kind
as to have a look and let me know what you think (and be honest) I'd so
appreciate it. My site: www.ricochetgraphix.com
Thanks ann

[steggy]

liz wrote: hello Ive recently graduated from a digital design program .I have my own site up and am looking for work. I need some honest feedback from people and thought this might be a good place to ask. So if anyone would be so kind as to have a look and let me know what you think (and be honest) I'd so appreciate it. My site: www.ricochetgraphix.com Thanks ann

OK here goes:))

1. The site is great, I love quick sites and not too much
stuff going on, cool cat:)
2. The first Photoshop artwork (the bearded man with the
apples) looks a bit off........the apple above his hat does
not look real, might be better to place the bottom of the
apple behind his hat:)
3. I love your paintings and drawings
4. The Naturno magazine ad.....I wonder what is happening on
the top of her head? I see blue sky beaming through her
hair, maybe it is because I can not zoom in, but still, it
makes you wonder:) Overall it is a good ad!
5. Now the brochure I really like. I would probably have
done something else with the positioning of text and photos
but it looks good. Not sure where you are from, but to me
that looks european:)

6. The Vintage Village site is great!!! I love it, except
for the fact that the intro is just too long...........it is
nice to have people puzzle how they can get inside to be
able to see what they are looking for, but do not chase them
away! Of course you have a "skip intro" option which is
good, not sure if regular customers will notice that though.
7. The link that says: www.ricochetgraphix.com, does not
bring me home, it does not work. If I hit the back button on
my browser the bird and the cat start flying again:)
8. The video promotion........though I think I agree with
the contents, why is that short clip 7.7 Mb?

Ok that was it. All and all you did a much better job than I did:(((
Still working on my website, so afraid to publish it, I am
starting over and over again..............good job Liz!


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steg

[liz]

Hi
Steggy
Thanks very much for your critique, greatly appreciated.I put this on a
couple of other newsgroups and got a few varied opinions; all very
useful.Someone suggested another site to post at : alt.html.critique on
usenet.
So when you finish you site maybe you will post it to get some feedback
too. Thanks again
liz

steggy wrote: liz wrote:helloIve recently graduated from a digital design program .I have my own siteup and am looking for work. I need some honest feedback from people andthought this might be a good place to ask. So if anyone would be so kindas to have a look and let me know what you think (and be honest) I'd soappreciate it. My site: www.ricochetgraphix.comThanks ann OK here goes:)) 1. The site is great, I love quick sites and not too much stuff going on, cool cat:) 2. The first Photoshop artwork (the bearded man with the apples) looks a bit off........the apple above his hat does not look real, might be better to place the bottom of the apple behind his hat:) 3. I love your paintings and drawings 4. The Naturno magazine ad.....I wonder what is happening on the top of her head? I see blue sky beaming through her hair, maybe it is because I can not zoom in, but still, it makes you wonder:) Overall it is a good ad! 5. Now the brochure I really like. I would probably have done something else with the positioning of text and photos but it looks good. Not sure where you are from, but to me that looks european:) 6. The Vintage Village site is great!!! I love it, except for the fact that the intro is just too long...........it is nice to have people puzzle how they can get inside to be able to see what they are looking for, but do not chase them away! Of course you have a "skip intro" option which is good, not sure if regular customers will notice that though. 7. The link that says: www.ricochetgraphix.com, does not bring me home, it does not work. If I hit the back button on my browser the bird and the cat start flying again:) 8. The video promotion........though I think I agree with the contents, why is that short clip 7.7 Mb? Ok that was it. All and all you did a much better job than I did:((( Still working on my website, so afraid to publish it, I am starting over and over again..............good job Liz!